托福指南：作文寫(xiě)作技巧及模板整理

　　新托�？荚嚨淖詈笠徊糠质�“寫(xiě)作”，要求考生寫(xiě)2篇文章，第一篇叫做綜合寫(xiě)作(Integrated writing)，讓考生用3分鐘時(shí)間先讀一篇約250字的文章，然后聽(tīng)一段2分鐘關(guān)于對(duì)所讀內(nèi)容的評(píng)論。再讓考生寫(xiě)一篇150到225個(gè)字的文章。這篇文章的寫(xiě)作滿分詳解及滿分模板作者早已給出。

　　第二篇作文叫“獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作”，和筆考、機(jī)考均無(wú)兩樣，給定考生一熟悉的話題，讓考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫(xiě)一篇300字的文章。典型的問(wèn)法是：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearance. Use specific reasons and details to support you answer.不少同學(xué)又跟筆者要獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作滿分詳解及滿分模板。實(shí)際上獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作詳解和模板筆者在很多年前便給出了模板，但不知何故網(wǎng)上和筆者的電腦中再也尋不著。只有提起筆來(lái)結(jié)合筆者再次參加新托�？荚嚨慕�(jīng)驗(yàn)給各位同學(xué)重新總結(jié)新托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作模板和高分寫(xiě)作技巧。

　　一、熟悉和理解新托福4大評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是高分關(guān)鍵

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1：effectively addresses the writing topic and task.

　　要求考生有效地闡明主題，考生千萬(wàn)不要跑題。從筆者的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)看，考生全部跑題現(xiàn)象較少，但是局部跑題現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，這也是考生不能輕取高分的緣故。

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2：well organized and well developed 邏輯條理清楚，發(fā)展充分。每次作者在講寫(xiě)作時(shí)總是把它和閱讀相對(duì)照。各位考生要想拿到獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作滿分必須真正理解“八股文”的結(jié)構(gòu)，千萬(wàn)不要寫(xiě)中國(guó)式的“八股文”，而應(yīng)寫(xiě)出“美式八股文”。

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)3：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的論據(jù)一定要具體、明確，且對(duì)論點(diǎn)有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而談。

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通過(guò)譴詞造句和習(xí)慣表達(dá)來(lái)展示語(yǔ)言的熟練程度)這一點(diǎn)是各位考生經(jīng)常忽視, 迷惘和不清楚的一點(diǎn)。新托福作文占總分120分的30分。我們對(duì)大家的要求是在作文上花的時(shí)間既要少又要拿高分，至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至滿分以上的同學(xué)一定要注意此項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。能用first千萬(wàn)不要用firstly，能用finally千萬(wàn)不要用last but not least. 不少同學(xué)花了很多功夫背這一外國(guó)人都不用的詞組，能用常用的詞千萬(wàn)不要用偏詞，同時(shí)我們要熟練掌握ETS喜歡的5大語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和2種從句。

　　作文要不要寫(xiě)?當(dāng)然要寫(xiě)，但我建議考生不要寫(xiě)的太多，寫(xiě)一篇要像一篇，最好讓行家改2-3篇。我曾經(jīng)碰到一個(gè)學(xué)生把185篇中的184篇均寫(xiě)了。拿給我看，結(jié)果同樣的錯(cuò)誤在184篇均反復(fù)出現(xiàn)，讓我哭笑不得，一問(wèn)才知說(shuō)是老師這么教的。學(xué)托福需要勤奮，但像這種勤奮就等于浪費(fèi)青春歲月。

　　作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背，可以背一些經(jīng)典的句型。倘若真要背，一定要認(rèn)準(zhǔn)此篇作文是范文的情況下才能背。

　　這4個(gè)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)哪條更重要?這主要取決于考生對(duì)作文考分的期望值。若要考滿分，此4點(diǎn)均重要。千萬(wàn)不能跑題，一跑題可就是0分了。考試費(fèi)也就白交了。

　　二、新托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作滿分模板

　　When it comes to the question of , different people might have different answers. In my view, I think that_________________ can , and . The reasons go as follows.

　　The main reason for my view is that .

　　First of all, Second,

　　Finally,

　　So, .

　　Another reason for my view is that .

　　On one hand, . For example,

　　. In addition, .

　　Finally, .

　　(分理由1) . (分理由2) .

　　In conclusion, based on the reasons I discussed above,(please rewrite the first paragraph in another way).

　　新托福寫(xiě)作并不難，不管你中文寫(xiě)作好還是不好，只要真正掌握了寫(xiě)作方法和要求，再寫(xiě)出3-5篇作文�？紓�(gè)滿分絕不是什么大驚小怪的事。越來(lái)越多同學(xué)來(lái)陽(yáng)光學(xué)校學(xué)托福和托福寫(xiě)作。關(guān)鍵原因是同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟宋覀兘痰姆椒ê笠环矫婺軓娜輵?yīng)對(duì)寫(xiě)作，更能在寫(xiě)作中取得高分或滿分的成績(jī)!

　　每個(gè)人都會(huì)說(shuō)work hard and work smart.但大多數(shù)人均沒(méi)有做到，至少在備戰(zhàn)新托福及新托福寫(xiě)人上沒(méi)做到。

　　托福作文模板推薦之一

　　A or B

　　Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由進(jìn)行解釋_____________________.For instance,____________________

　　Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由進(jìn)行解釋___________________For example,____________________

　　The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

　　Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

　　In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

　　托福作文模板推薦之二

　　A or B

　　將原題復(fù)述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________

　　The second reason can be seen by every person that________.

　　In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

　　There are some disadvantages in____________________另一種觀點(diǎn)的缺點(diǎn)__________.

　　In a word, _____________重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)句并縮寫(xiě)理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之三

　　單一命題式

　　The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.

　　Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

　　Futhermore,______________.

　　In short,_________________復(fù)述前文中的理由______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之四

　　agree or disagree

　　Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

　　The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.

　　Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

　　What is more, some students are interested in____________.

　　In a word, ________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之五

　　A or B

　　Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as ________________________.

　　Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________).

　　From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之六

　　Agree or disagree

　　Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　One of the primary causes is that_______________________.

　　Examples_______________.

　　But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.

　　What is more_______________. Examples___________

　　General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之七

　　A or B

　　In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

　　The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________

　　Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________

　　It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.

　　In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

　　托福作文模板推薦之八

　　A or B

　　When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.

　　Also, ________________________.

　　This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

　　Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之九

　　A or B

　　When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.

　　Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________. A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________. Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此處論述B的1-2優(yōu)點(diǎn)___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十

　　____________改寫(xiě)并復(fù)述題目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For exmaple_____________.

　　Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.

　　In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重復(fù)優(yōu)點(diǎn)__________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十一

　　A or B

　　____________改寫(xiě)并復(fù)述題目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary cause is that_______________________.

　　What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.

　　Futhermore, ________________________.

　　Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________. _______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十二

　　A or B

　　____________改寫(xiě)并復(fù)述題目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.

　　In a word, ___________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十三

　　A or B

　　From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

　　The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.

　　There is another factor that deserves some words here.

　　In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十四

　　agree or disagree

　　Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.

　　Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.

　　In a word, _________________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

　　托福作文模板推薦之十五

　　agree or disagree

　　Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

　　The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.

　　Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

　　What is more, some students are interested in____________.

　　In a word, ________________.